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Bahar Karimi
Bahar used adverbs well and demonstrated excellent listening as she could comprehend all of his questions easily. Furthermore, she used adverbs appropriately and used a wide range of vocabulary. She should work on her grammar further as she used present verbs when speaking in the past and she used a gerund after ‘to’.
Mehrnosh Rahimi
Mehrnosh gave a detailed introduction and used examples to support her answers. Also, she had good pronunciation skills and could speak in the present simple tense well. She needs to work on her listening slightly as she misheard a ‘when’ question for a ‘what’, in addition, she would benefit from using modal verbs when talking about possible vacation problems.
Marziyeh Dehghanian
Marziyeh used sequencers well in her answers and used suitable language for each of her questions. In addition to this, she spoke in full simple sentences and gave detailed replies where possible. However, she needs to work on her pronunciation more because she would pronounce ‘v’ as ‘w’, such as ‘awoid’. Also, she tended to use auxiliary verbs in present simple sentences so she should work on this more.
Mahbobeh Arab Nejad
Mahbobeh demonstrated very good descriptive skills and used adverbs suitably. Furthermore, she had good pronunciation skills and used obligatory language well. She ought to work on prepositions more as she tended to use an inappropriate one a few times, like ‘at evening’ and ‘in my last vacation’. Also, there were a couple of incorrect verb collocations so she should work on this as well.
Farideh Ezedi
Fardeh exhibited very good listening skills as she was able to comprehend all of her questions easily; she was also able to talk at length. In addition, she used opening expressions and supported her ideas with examples. She should work on her grammar slightly as she used a past form when it ought to have been the present and she used incorrect prepositions occasionally, such as ‘at my room’.
Ali Nekoei Far
Ali used opinionative language well and used a wide range of vocabulary which was appropriate to each question. Furthermore, he used modals and adverbs well and demonstrated good listening as he could answer each question with ease. He made a couple of prepositional errors and also once or twice made a couple or word order errors as he said ‘we both are’.
Kheyro NesaAfrasiyabi
Kheyro used an array of words and could use sequencers correctly when she spoke about his typical day. Also, she used suitable modal verbs and spoke at a steady speed. She needs to work on verb patters slightly as she used ‘to’ incorrectly, for example ‘I prefer to go to away’. Also, she should use more synonyms to avoid repetition.
Poria Shayegh
Poria used examples well and was able to comprehend the majority of his questions easily. Also, he spoke clearly and used the present simple tense well. Having said this, he needs to work on expanding his answers as they were often very brief. Furthermore, he needs to work on the past tense more because when asked a question in the past, he responded in the present.
Shirin Khosravi
Shirin used a wide range of vocabulary in her responses which were always suitable for each questions, for example, ‘surf the net’. In addition, she used correct verb patterns and used adverbs and modals appropriately. Having said this, she would benefit from using more examples to support her ideas and she should work on verb collocations slightly as she said ‘lost my flight’.
Sadegh Rezmhi
Sadegh spoke in full sentences and used exemplification language well. Furthermore, he used relative clauses correctly and could speak in the present and past tense easily. However, he needs to work on his pronunciation more as he pronounced ‘suit’ as ‘sweet’. Also, he used nouns alongside with the pronoun, rather than just one of them, so he should work on this too.
Satar Shamsi Poor
Satar was able to comprehend his questions relatively well and he had good pronunciation. Also, he used correct word order and spoke at a steady pace. Having said this, he should work on expanding some of his answers more as when he was asked about healthy habits, he only spoke about sports instead of food as well. Also, he needs to work on his grammar more as he did not use modal verbs when speaking about possible problems and he placed adverbs at the end of sentences.
Abas Nabizadeh
Abasused a good range of vocabulary and used suitable phrases. In addition, he spoke at a steady pace and had good listening skills as he could comprehend his questions well. He needs to work on his tenses more as he used present simple verbs when he spoke in the past. Also, he needs to work on expanding more as some of his answers fell a little short.
Mohamad HoseinNabizadeh
Mohamad used conjunctions well and used debating language appropriately. Furthermore, he could speak in the present and past simple tense well. Having said this, he should work on extending his answers more by using examples to support his ideas. Finally, he made some pronunciation mistakes as he pronounced ‘v’ as ‘w’ e.g. ‘wegetables’.
Ahmad Shafahi Ahmad could speak in full simple sentences and he could understand all of his questions easily. Also, he used suitable vocabulary for each of his questions and used pronouns well. However, he needs to work on his pronunciation as he mispronounced ‘suit’ and ‘wallet’. Furthermore, he used ‘o’clock with half past times (6.30 o’clock) and he gave brief replies so he ought to develop his answers.
Ali Bazrafshan
Ali used correct verb patterns and could easily comprehend his questions, which demonstrated good listening and comprehension skills. In addition, he used full sentences and could talk at length. However, he tended to use auxiliary verbs in the present simple tense and he used singular verb forms when a plural was needed. So he needs to work on his grammar more.
Arezo Gholami
Arezo gave a detailed introduction and this continued with lengthy answers. Furthermore, she used suitable vocabulary and used modal verbs. She needs to work on her listening a little as she miscomprehended a couple of questions and this resulted in a different answer being given. Also, she should work on her grammar more as she would use a mixture of tenses when only one should have been used.
Delbar Ajdari
Delbarused examples well and had good listening skills as she could respond automatically. Also, she used modals when speaking about possible problems and could speak in both the present and past tense easily. Having said this, she did mishear one question and this resulted in an incorrect answer being given, so she should clarify more before answers. Also, she should work on her stress slightly as a few words were wrongly stressed.
Shabnam Zargani
Shabnam gave a very detailed introduction and was able to talk at length. Furthermore, she used obligatory language well and could speak in various tenses without difficulty. She should work on her listening slightly as when she was asked which kind of vacation she preferred, she talked about her last vacation. Also, she made a couple of prepositional mistakes.
MohamadAlizadeh
Mohamad had good pronunciation and spoke clearly. Also, he demonstrated good listening and comprehension skills as he seemed to understand what each question was asking. However, he struggled to give a coherent response as he appeared to be lacking the correct grammatical knowledge as he made several word order mistakes and he was not able to give an accurate response which was of adequate length. So he needs to work on expanding his answers much more.
MahmodTorabi
Mahmod used excellent opinionative language and he used appropriate vocabulary throughout. Furthermore, he had good pronunciation, spoke in full sentences and used personal examples well. However, he ought to work on his speaking speed as he would pause unnaturally before answering a question or in between his sentences and this reduced his fluency.
EhsanSalehi
Ehsan had good listening skills as he was able to response immediately and did not struggle to understand his questions. Also, he used adverbial language well and used opening expressions well. Having said this, he needs to work on his grammar more as he missed out main verbs a few times when he used modals in his sentences. Finally, he mispronounced a couple of words, including ‘read’ in the past form.
MohamadTajali
Mohamad used opening phrases brilliantly and used an excellent array of vocabulary which directly suited each question. Furthermore, he used conditionals correctly and used phrasal verbs and examples well. He should work on verb collocations slightly as his used an inappropriate one once or twice and he used an article when one was not needed, such as ‘have a free time’.
SaeedSheikhi
Saeed used a wide range of vocabulary and spoke at a steady pace. In addition, he spoke in full sentences, could give detailed answers throughout and had good listening skills as he could comprehend his questions easily. He should work on his grammar as he used incorrect verb patternsbecause he followed modal verb with a gerund. Also, he missed out articles a couple of times.
HoseinZarei
Hosein could comprehend all of his questions easily and he was a controlled speaker. Furthermore, he used third person forms correctly and he could talk in full simple sentences well. He should work on pronouns more as he would use them along with the noun, such as ‘I like it the weather’. Also, he should try to use more examples to expand his answers a little more.