موسسه آموزش عالی آزاد فاخر

Fateme

Errors: One children (should be singular) sometimes walking, really love swimming (lack of ‘I’)  I can’t very good swim (word order and should use ‘well’ instead of good), problems with days, able to say months with some help.

Good points:  intro, sentences with because, I, he/she and we forms, able to use appropriate vocab , use of very and especially,

Ali

Errors: I don’t have time play with my brother (should be ‘to play’), I am exercising (should use simple present), some problems with months, every time I am at home (should be ‘all the time’; however this is a more advanced grammar point)

Good points: appropriate vocab, use of I, he/she, they verb forms, good phrase: it’s good for health, good use of ‘about’ in the phrase ‘about 3 times a week’

Atefe

Errors: I back riding (should be ‘I go horse bike riding) or walking (should be ‘I go walking’)  mother housewife (needs verb), I really pop fan (needs verb)

Good points: able to say days and months well, adverb of frequency ‘three times a week’, use of always, sometimes, good physical descriptions, use of comparative ‘older’, verb forms I, he/she, they,

Zahra

Errors: lack of verb in phrases such as ‘younger daughter 7 years old’, wrong word order for example: ‘my daughter older is…’ and ‘in house usually I am listening..’, wrong pronoun ‘ my father…they has moustache’.

Good points: verb forms I, he/she, good use of comparative ‘older, younger’, adverb of frequency ‘usually’, good vocab for personal descriptions,

Roholah

Errors:  some problems with days of week and months of year, although months were correct second time,

Good points: I, he/she verb forms in positive and negative,  if phrase (‘if the weather is nice I go…), adverbs of frequency usually, twice a week, good vocab to describe people, family and hobbies,

Morteza

Errors: he’s black hair (this means he is black hair. Need to use he has …), in the future I like engineer (need to use ‘I would like to be…’),

Good points: I, he/she verb forms, use of past simple ‘I was born in… I went to school when I was 7’, use of present perfect, adverbs of frequency ‘about 5 times a week’.

Samira

Errors: I’m study, I’m exercise etc… (need to use I study, I exercise), my father is tall and brown hair (lack of ‘has’, struggled with months of year.

Good points: I, he/she verb forms, good physical descriptions,

Nasibe

Errors: I 31 years old (lack of verb), I don’t like swim…(should be ‘swimming’),  I’m read (need to use ‘I read…), mother is short and black hair… (needs to say ‘has black hair’),

Good points: good use of direct object -I do it every day, good vocab, able to say days and months well, conversation flowed well.

Samane

Errors: struggled with days and months, didn’t understand ‘look like’, ‘very problem in the home’ (should be ‘there are a lot of problems…’)

Good points: Strong intro, able to use I, he/she verb forms and in negative as well, able to describe other people fairly well.

Arezo

Errors: my mother is housewife (lack of indefinite article), I housewife (lack of verb), could have given more detailed physical descriptions with more adjectives,

Good points: able to use I, he/she and they verb forms, good adverbs of frequency ‘twice a week’, ‘some of …’and ‘most of the time’, usually,  able to say days and months,

Sahar

Errors: she has average height and she has overweight (need to use ‘is’), big family is happy family (need to use indefinite article ‘a’).

Good points: Strong intro with lots of info, good use of verb forms I, he/she, we, sentences in positive and negative, good descriptions with good use of adjectives eg short, grey and light brown, overweight, able to say days and months,

Mojtaba

Errors: my sister have a daughter (need to use ‘has’), a big family can have a lot of troubles (should use ‘problems’)

Good points: strong intro and able to talk about self and others well, use of adverbs usually, every, good use of ‘if’ phrase ‘if you have a small family…’

Saeed

Errors: my father is manager and my mother is teacher (lack of indefinite article ‘a’), family more money, my father is tall and black hair (lack of verb ‘has’), initially said blue hair instead of blonde!,

Good points: able to talk about self and others, good use of adverb ‘some’, good use of modal ‘I can play guitar’, able to say days and months.

(Parivash) bahare

Errors: I have two sisters, not brother (need to say ‘no brother’ or ‘I don’t have a brother’, I’m study… (should use ‘I’ only), some problems understanding my questions and gave short answers,

Good points:  able to talk about self and others, day of week fine and months of year almost all correct, able to describe hobbies,