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Interview Feedback Level 5 Group 3

Majid

Errors:  ‘I’ve been in Turkey 2 times’ (correct: I’ve been to Turkey twice),  ‘going to gliding…’ (correct: I went gliding…), ‘go out and see another city to stay in your hotel’ (correct:…rather than stay in your hotel),’I say him or her…’(correct: I would advise him to…)

Good points: Able to use various verb forms correctly, demonstrated knowledge of a range of vocabulary, able to use phrases with if, the ability to use present perfect, relative pronouns

Ali

Errors: ‘I really love fly’ (correct: …love flying), ‘you’re guest’ (correct: you’re a guest…),’on internet’ (correct: on the internet’),

Good points: able to speak about present, past and future, speech very natural and use of more colloquial phrases such as ‘Okay I get it’, great vocabulary, excellence grammatical usage

Parisa

Errors: ‘I really like to go…’ (correct: I’d really like to go), ‘I read about history of Paris too much’ (Correct: I’ve read so much about the history of Paris), ‘it’s same in all of the world’ (correct: it’s the same in all of the world)

Good points: able to use different verb forms, able to use various parts of speech such as adverbs ‘absolutely’ and ‘just’, and phrases such as ‘rather than…’

Shaghayeh

Errors: ‘it depend on’ (correct: it depends on…’, ‘when a tourist come to Iran…’ (correct: when a tourist comes to Iran), ‘memorable places that all people in the world can remember them’ (do not use ‘them’ at the end of the sentence), ‘when you surprised…’ (when you are surprised…)

Good points: good use of phrases such as ‘it’s not suitable to…’, ‘it’s usual to…’, ‘it’s better to…’,’prefer to…’; good use of modals such as can, must and should,

Sedighe

Errors: in intro ‘I see she’ (correct: I see her), ‘respect to other cultures’ (correct: respect other cultures), ‘if we don’t respect we can’t get on the wrong foot’ (correct: …our relationship can get off on the wrong foot’), ‘I don’t stay in this hotel’ (correct: I haven’t stayed in this hotel,

Good points: able to use phrases with when and if, used different verb forms in affirmative and negative, able to respond in present perfect ‘No, I’ve never been abroad’,

Soodabe

Errors: in intro ‘I have 25 years old’ (correct: I am 25…), ‘small talking…’ (correct: small talk…), in response to question ‘Have you ever been abroad?’ -‘No I don’t have’ (correct: No, I haven’t), ‘I like go to Germany’ (correct: I’d like to go to…)

Good points:  able to give various examples in answers, able to use first and third person,

Mehsam

Errors: ‘he know that he don’t kiss woman’ (correct: he should know that he shouldn’t kiss women…), ‘they don’t respect to you’ (correct: they don’t respect you), ‘I want to go German’ (correct: I want to go to Germany), ‘your friendship get off …’ (your friendship gets off…),

Good points: able to use different verb forms, used a range of vocabulary,

Amene

Errors: ‘how many do you have salary’ (correct: how much do you earn?), ‘in their communicate’ (correct: in their communication), ‘shake hands is okay’ (correct: shaking hands…), ‘we have some gesture’ (correct: gestures)

Good points:  able to use various verb forms, able to use past tense, good use of words such as ‘between close friends’, ‘several times’…

Narges

Errors: ‘we respect to other cultures’ (correct: we respect other cultures), ‘when two people saw together…(correct: when two people see each…), ‘No, I never go to…’ (correct: No, I’ve never been to…), ‘to stay to an expensive hotel’ (correct: to stay in an…), ‘I don’t have more money (Correct: I don’t have much money)

Good points: phrases such as ‘in fact…’, ‘I hope…, phrases with if and when, appropriate vocab, demonstrated different verb forms,

Farnaz

Errors: ‘No, I never been abroad’ (correct: I’ve never been abroad), ‘they shake hands to each other’ (they shake hands with each other), ‘childrens’ (correct: children), ‘every country have a own culture’ (correct: every country has its own culture), ‘it affect in the mentals people’ (It affects peoples’ minds)

Good points: able to use different verb forms, able to talk about a variety of topics, good use of phrases such as ‘we have to respect all the cultures’, ‘it depends on…’, ‘all kinds of…’, ‘sends a message to them’, ‘it affects…’

Mitra

Errors: ‘my mother is teacher, my father is businessman…’ (correct: use definite article with jobs, eg ‘a teacher, a businessman…’), ‘my country have…’ (correct: my country has…), ‘we very respect to other people’ (correct: we respect other people a lot),’ shake one hand’ (correct: shaking hands)

Good points: able to respond with appropriate vocabulary, able to use first and third person, able to use imperative form,

Ghobad

Errors: problems in listening and understanding, errors in third person singular and plural,

mixing up adjectives,adverbs and nouns e.g. not politely and if I reservation...,

Good points: lots of vocab, able to use verbs in different forms.

Kianoosh

Errors: pronunciation of I advise.., use of past simple instead of present perfect, use of  infinitive instead of gerund e.g., it's worth to see(correct:it's worth seeing), I don't remember to do (correct:I don't remember doing...)

Good points: some good phrases, such as it's worth, you should be prepared to..., I spend it..., flowing conversation, variety of verb forms and correct use of different grammatical devices.

Iman

Errors: using present tense instead of past, lack of relative pronouns, mixing tenses e.g. "I like to saw there", pronunciation of advise

Good points: range of vocab, use of adverbs a little and very, and adverb of time "once",

Farimah

Errors: didn't understand meaning of abroad, use of noun instead of verb"I suggestion to other people", vocab error "respect to..."(correct:respect...),

Good points: able to use present and past tenses, good use of "actually" and "of course" to aid conversation, extra info such as "I rode a horse without experience"& "I suggest...not force them..."

Saber

Errors: singular and plural errors e.g. "one sisters", "my sister...her names is...", didn't understand "abroad" initially, used present instead of present perfect, "they don't like of you" (correct: they don't like you)

Good points: good examples, when and if phrases, variety of verbs in present tense,

Narjes

Errors: "I don't go to another abroad.." (correct: I haven't been abroad anywhere else", need to use indefinite article with jobs, vocab error "make a good relation" (correct: have a good relationship", need to use plural with "some gesture",

Good points: able to use present and past simple, variety of vocab and examples,

Zahra

Errors: need to use indefinite article with house and hotel, need to add "s" to "it depend", instead of saying "the culture of them" say "their culture",

Good points: able to use present simple&continuous, past and future tenses with time markers such as "about...months ago...", able to use "however", variety of vocab,

Mohammad Mehdi

Errors: didn't use past tense, needed to use plural for "eye", "mixed up pronouns "we shake my head", use of "very much" instead of "a lot"e.g. "I see movies very much",

Good points: variety of vocab and examples, able to use verbs in different forms.

Roya

Errors: said "woman" instead of "women", and "man" instead of "men", able to use past tense but not consistent, didn't understand "abroad"&didn't use present perfect to respond.

Good points: Apart from tenses grammar was good and clear, variety of examples, good phrases "the culture is part of human personality"&"we should  respect human rights"...

Mohammad Mehdi

Errors: using couldn't instead of "can't" or "shouldn't", using present perfect instead of present simple e.g. "last summer I have been...", error in past "I was stayed..."

Good points: many examples and range of vocab, variety of adjectives "beautiful, good, scary, exciting", able to use present and past tense (even if sometimes incorrect or limited),