موسسه آموزش عالی آزاد فاخر

Interview FeedbackLevel9,12 Group2

Soror

Good points:Use of past tense, accurate use of verb forms, responses to questions eg ´Good question´ and ´Actually…´

Errors: ´I tell me…´ (correct: I tell myself), ´everything in the shopping I see I buy´ (correct: everything I see in the shops I buy), ´I can my works myself´ (correct: I can do my work myself)

Sadegh

Good points: past tense, good use of vocabulary and phrases

Errors: ´I should be pessimism´ (correct: pessimistic), ´I think by this way…´(correct: in this way…), ´be careful about spend money´ (correct: about spending…)

Omid

Good points: Great phrases, and vocabulary in general, good use of past tense,

Errors:´while …,but…´ (don´t use ´but´ in this sentence), ´Of course I haven’t had a big change in my life…´ (why ´of course?´), ´you don’t never mind of disease…´ (´you don’t mind disease´, or ´you are not bothered by disease´)

Ahmad

Good points: Great vocabulary and phrases,

Errors: Poor grammar in sentences, ´I´m confident about yourself´ (correct: myself), ´don’t never buy things that what they need it´( perhaps you want to say ´don’t but more than more what you need´?),´I don’t never have believe about destiny…´ (I never believed in…´)

Satar

Good points: good phrases, able to answer questions clearly with good examples

Errors:´It depending situation´ (it depends on the situation), errors with third  person, mixing past and present tense

Mostafa

Good points: great vocabulary and grammar in general, use of past simple and great use of present perfect ´ so to tell you the truth, the relationship with family members has totally changed´.

Errors: ´ because I think the new technology family relationship is not going to stronger´ (perhaps you want to say ´because of new technology family relationships are getting worse´ ?), ´if people at that time know…the revolution never happen´ (correct: if people at that time knew …the revolution would never have happened), ´one of the worse…´ (correct: worst), ´we lost in Tehran´ (correct: we got lost…)

Negin

Good points: great use of conditional, and passive, and combination of tenses

Errors:´ there are many travel hassles that I can mention them´ (don’t use ´them´ at the end- you don’t need to use a pronoun), ´careful about…´ (correct: careful with…), ´we didn’t know what can we do…´ (correct: we didn’t know what to do)

Pegah

Good points: good phrases to describe examples and good phrases of conversation such as ´on the whole…´

Errors: ´I didn’t have any special problem…´(correct: I haven’t had any particular problems…), ´for find direction´(correct: to find directions), ´sometimes accident or homesick´ (correct: sometimes we may have an accident or be homesick),

Nilofar

Good points: Great description in simple past, phrases such as ´realize that…´, ´it´s related to…´, great use of verbs

Errors: ´for save´(correct: to save), ´he stuck in the hole´ (correct: he got stuck…), ´had a few money´ (correct: had a bit of money),

Sima

Good points: great phrases such as ´ I don’t have a head for figures´, ´faced with…´, ´as a matter of fact´, good description in past,

Errors:´for enrolling…´ (correct: to enroll), ´I learned to don’t put off something…´ (correct: I learned to not put off…), ´I don´t believe to be alive´ (correct: I can´t believe I´m alive),

Ahmadreza

Good points:good use of passive in present and past, relative pronouns, good vocab such as ´nobody is flawless´ and ´I mean…´

Errors:word order eg ´I always hard work´(correct: …work hard), ´never I break my promise´ (correct: I never break…), ´…that I must to do´ (correct: that I must do),

Hosein

Good points:Good phrases such as ´Let´s start by…´,´I begin with…´, great descriptions in past, vocab ´I’m mechanically inclined´ and ´I have a head for figures´

Errors: ´there are a lot for precautions´ (correct:…a lot of…), ´to avoid in a robbery situation´ (correct: to avoid a robbery),´I must´ (in past: I had to…´),

Behzad

Good points: good phrases such as ´I can get along with other people´,´ I look on the bright side´, ´I never give up´; good attempt at past perfect conditional –almost correct! -´if I had used a credit card I would never lost my money´ (…I would never have lost…),

Errors: mixing present and past tenses to talk about past, sometimes speech was not clear and pronunciation was weak,

Zahra

Good points: able to give lots of examples for travel problems, able to describe well what she does and how often.

Errors:´I like great shape´ (do you mean ´I am in shape´?), ´for health body´ (correct: healthy…), ´I got bump´ (you can say ´there is turbulence´)

Fahimeh

Good points: able to use different verbs in present tense, uses a variety of vocabulary, 

Errors:´for men its freedom than woman´ (correct: for men there is more freedom than for women), it´s okay to wear long pants and long dress´ (correct: women should wear…),

Mohammad

Good points: able to use present and past tense in different forms, able to respond with concise examples,

Errors: ´I eat health food´ (correct: healthy), ´they want to healthy´ (correct: they want to be healthy), ´our people have to modest clothes´ (…have to wear…), ´the womans…´ (correct: the women),

Mehrzad

Good points:able to give clear examples of what he does and how often,

Errors: ´when I go to vacation´ (correct: when I go on vacation), could have given more description, especially about vacation,

Hosein

Good points: able to speak with good grammar in present tense, and with appropriate vocabulary,

Errors: ´they want stay healthy´ (correct: they want to stay healthy), ´I like walk in the park´ (correct: I like walking in the park), I needed to repeat a question twice ´What activities do you do on vacation?´

Samaneh

Good points: able to speak at a basic level in the present tense with appropriate vocabulary

Errors: ´I prefer walk´ (correct:…walking), unable to give examples of travel problems, answers very short, 

Babak

Good points: able to use lots of vocab, able to use verbs in present and past tense,

Errors: using present continuous instead of present simple, mixing past and present tense to talk about past

Amirali

Good points: able to use present and past tenses, able to say what he does and how often,

Errors: using present continuous instead of present simple, ´to be in shape body´ (correct: to be in shape),

Leila

Good points: able to respond with a range of vocabulary, able to say what and how often she does something,

Errors:´because it´s good…to be body shape´(correct: it´s good to be in shape); ´I like walk…´ (correct: I like walking );´there is many historical place´ (correct: there are many historical places);´I like go to the India´ (Correct: I´d like to go to India),